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The Bird is the Word: Sophisticated Schoolyard Shenanigans

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January 17, 2025 by szachik@pvs.org 2 Comments

Our new Spring Semester middle-school team of bloggers warmed up this week with a creative exercise–responding to a Poets&Writer’s “The Time Is Now” Creative Nonfiction Prompt.

Our creatives were asked to write a spatial autobiography of the objects in their home or room, to tour their favorite things while weaving into the passage the memories attached to them. In this week where so many of our LA loved ones have lost the places where they feel most at home, we were moved by the comfort and association Morgan Richardson draws from her special place. The class voted it the spatial autobiography that best captures the essence of the writer.

The loud whistle reminds me of leaping off the starting block

The lane line reminds me of swimming as fast as I can each race

The green field reminds me of warm ups in winter before swimming

The bench reminds me of where I slick my hair and put on my cap each day

The kick board reminds me of challenging myself and becoming faster

The little pool reminds me of when I first stepped foot in the pool

The shallow end reminds me of moving up levels, scared but prepared

The water jug reminds me of jumping out of the water thirsty and parched

The deep blue pool reminds me of the place where I feel happy and most at home

Filed Under: Home, Wednesday Writing Prompt Tagged With: home, Morgan Richardson

Comments

  1. Kerry Maguire says

    January 17, 2025 at 4:13 pm

    Lovely, Morgan! Keep writing your poems!

    Reply
  2. Henry Ryan says

    January 18, 2025 at 4:07 am

    Morgan, you are a talented artist and a great writer!

    Reply

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