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Part 1 of the Story

October 3, 2019 by szachik@pvs.org 52 Comments

by Doreen Yuan

A Review of the Urban-Legend storytelling rules:

1. The comment section is part of the story. All comments are ordered by number.

2. Comments that include a >> and a number (ex: >>1) are replies to the comment with that number.

3. Anonymous users in the comment section are part of the story. There are multiple anonymous accounts.

4. The characters named No Longer Human and Curry are part of the story in the comments.

5. Readers can leave messages in the comment section but should not intentionally destroy or try to confuse the coherence of the story.

6. Readers can respond to any anonymous character interaction in the comment section–that response may change and contribute to the story.

7. Do not use inappropriate language.

8. The roles and anonymity in the comment section are created by the primary story author himself.

9. The time of all messages is based on the time of writing.

10. Have fun, and enjoy it.

The story begins . . .

A microblog for help

By No Longer Human 

                   Hey, so if anyone is seeing this right now, I need help~ I am on a train coming back home, and I’m lost. I’m at “Kisaragi station.” Does anyone know where that is???

The story continues in the Comments . . . .

Story Editor: Renée

Filed Under: Fiction Tagged With: Doreen Yuan, Part I of the Story

Introduction . . . before the story starts

September 13, 2019 by szachik@pvs.org 1 Comment

By Doreen Yuan 

Welcome back to school everyone! This is Doreen. Over summer vacation, I learned about urban legends that were created by mysterious profiles on 2Channel. I want to share it with you here. But before I do, let me explain what 2Channel is.

2Channel (2ch)

It is an online Japanese textboard (a simpler version of a forum).

Management

The website’s scale and management style is unique. It currently has more than 1,000 active boards. They are categories such as “Social News,” “Computers,” “Cooking,” etc. These categories make it the most comprehensive forum in Japan. Each board usually has hundreds of active threads. Each thread contains up to 1,000 anonymous comments.

Software

2ch operates on forum software that was considered innovative at the time of its founding (1999). It represented a major departure from the bulletin-board systems of the 1980s. Everything can be done anonymously. A post in a thread will “bump” the thread, making active posts high on the overall thread list. Each thread is limited to a maximum of 1,000 postings, and a new thread must be opened by some anonymous user (self-elected) to continue discussion. This prevents the “rotting” of old threads and keeps active, fascinating topics refreshed. It also saves bandwidth, which is a major concern on a forum as large as 2ch. Old threads are moved to an archive where people can still view them until they are eventually deleted.

Anonymous Posting

One of the most remarkable features of 2ch is the complete freedom of anonymous posting. This is quite different from most English internet forums that require some form of registration. They usually require email validation to further confirm personal identity. On 2ch, the name field is available but rarely used. If you enter a real name, you will be considered a novice, an administrator, or someone trying to become an internet celebrity. 

The urban legend below is based on the premise of using the comment section of 2Channel.

The Mysterious Personal Profiles

as presented by Doreen Yuan

Meet the Characters:

Profile photo:

Online ID: No longer human

Sex: secret

Age: secret

Address: Japan-Yokohama

Character: cracks jokes, frivolous, outgoing and active.

What’s up: The real things are apt to be deviant.


Profile photo:

Online ID: Carry

Sex: /

Age: /

Address: /

Character: /

What ‘s up: /

Now, begin:

Join my Urban Legend. Make a mysterious profile yourself and become part of my story…. Below are some rules you need to know before I start to tell you my Urban Legend in the next post (check the comments).

1. The comment section is part of the story. Pay attention to it.

2. Anonymous users in the comment section are part of the story. Pay attention to them.

3. The characters named No longer human and Carry, who add comments, are part of the story.

4. Readers can leave messages in the comment section but should not intentionally destroy or try to confuse the coherence of the story.

5. Readers can respond to any anonymous character interaction in the comment section–that response may change and contribute to the story.

6. Do not use inappropriate language.

7. The roles and anonymity in the comment section are created by the primary story author himself.

8. The time of all messages is based on the time of writing.

9. Have fun, and enjoy it.

Editor: Luke Langlois

Filed Under: Mystery, Set Up and Welcome, Uncategorized Tagged With: Doreen Yuan, Introduction...before the story starts

2nd-Place Winner, 2018 PVS Poetry Competition

May 2, 2018 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

The English Department, Publications Club, and Blog Class sponsored the second annual Poetry Competition in the Middle and Upper Schools. Poems went to Dr. Carr, fearless organizer and underwriter of prizes. She passed them on to Round #1 judges, a gallery of Humanities teachers, who culled the nearly 60 poetic entries down to 12. Then, those 12 finalists went to final judge Mr. Sarkis who decided upon a 1st place, 2nd, 3rd, and Honorable Mention. Reprinted here is the 2nd-place poem, “On the train ride . . .,” penned by sophomore Doreen Yuan. Note: all 12 finalists can be seen on the bulletin board in the Upper School Lobby.

 

On the train ride . . .

By Doreen Yuan

 

On the train ride of our love, if you want to get off before our time is over,

please don’t wake me up.

Let me sleep through it, and let me pretend not to know that you’re gone.

Winners compiled by Editor Shelby Armor

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: 2nd-Place Winner: 2018 PVS Poetry Competition, Doreen Yuan

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