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The Case for Poetry Out Loud

November 1, 2022 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

By Junior Indy Behr

It’s that time of year when PVS students wander the halls mumbling lines of verse under their breath. It’s time, again, for the annual Palm Valley School Poetry Recitation–something we’ve done at PVS for fifty years. Parents have told me Poetry Recitation Finals are their favorite PVS assemblies. And, English teachers seem convinced the world is a better place with poetry in it. Students, however, don’t . . . always respond with joy at the prospect of reciting poetry before crowds. Indy Behr argues poetry reciting is good for us–kind of like taking your vitamins.

Blog Advisor Zachik

Recently, Alyna Llapitan authored an article, “An Ick I’ve Had,” advocating for changes to Palm Valley’s annual Poetry Recitation Competition–a competition that, in the Upper School, segues into the national Poetry Out Loud competition. Personally, I enjoy this annual tradition, and I also think it offers valuable learning opportunities for students. 

Poetry Out Loud is a national poetry recitation competition that occurs annually. About ten years ago, Palm Valley melded its 50-year-old Poetry Recitation with national Poetry Out Loud standards. While students in nearly all grades still participate in Palm Valley’s Poetry Recitation, in the Upper-School English classes, students pick primarily poems from the Poetry Out Loud anthology. Typically, guest judges are brought into classes for one day. They choose 2-3 winners per each class, depending on class size. Those winners move on to the Upper-School finals. 

I think that Poetry Out Loud is great because it teaches students two very valuable things that will be useful throughout their lives. Firstly, it teaches students how to speak with confidence. I understand that some people really dislike speaking in front of others, and I have had that fear myself, but if you go through high school without attempting to combat this, you will face many hurdles in your career. Speaking with confidence is a skill that is crucial in almost every career imaginable. Secondly, Poetry Out Loud teaches students about not just the value of poetry, but the value of literature as a whole. Though perhaps not all careers involve it, being familiar with literature and having an appreciation for it is something that will help everyone in my opinion. Cultural context and exploration can effectively be taught through these poetry recitations, and we learn about many poets as well as different types of poetry through this program.

Alyna made the point that Palm Valley should consider having students perform only in front of the judges rather than having to perform in front of their entire class. While I understand where she is coming from, I think this defeats the purpose of this competition being a way for students to feel more comfortable performing in front of several people. When you have to present a plan to your office at a job later in your life, you will be doing it in front of thirty people, not three. She is correct that in 9th grade we opted for performing solely for judges; however, this was due to the pandemic, and this is the reason we reverted to the original system the following year.

Overall, I do very much sympathize with those who are against the Poetry Recitation continuing in its current form. Despite this, I still think that these opponents could still learn several valuable things from this competition, and I wholeheartedly support it remaining in place.

*Join us the the Upper-School Poetry Recitation Finals on Friday, December 9, at 2:15. Do you have middle-school recitators you want to cheer for? Join us for the Middle-School Poetry Recitation Finals on Tuesday, December 6, at 1:10.

Filed Under: Op-Ed, Poetry Tagged With: Indy Behr, The Case for Poetry Out Loud

The desert rain

October 27, 2022 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

When I say, “Write a poem,” Penny says, “Done.” She tells me she hasn’t lived in the desert all her life. It must be the deep roots of her family connection because she captures here the miracle of rain in the desert.

Blog Advisor Zachik

By 7th-Grader Penny Andreas

The mountains blocked the sun

From the night that was disguising

The clouds started to come

And the wind started rising

The soft droplets fell

As the pavement darkened

With the sweet smell of rain

The dry sat there still

Thunder stroke

And lightning flashed

The clouds all shook

This empty land

The palm trees swayed

And the streets flooded  

Healing the broken

And the decayed

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: Penny Andreas, The desert rain

Picnic at the edge of time

October 25, 2022 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

By Junior Levi Kassinove

Something is in the air, and it’s not autumn. The annual Palm Valley School Poetry Recitation quickly approaches. I asked our bloggers to speak to, for, against, about poetry–or compose their own original verse. Levi and his soul ask “Why?”

Blog Advisor Zachik

On a large beach towel

Draped across humble grass

Ideas ferment 

What is ascent?

Surrounded by reality and griffins 

A lost soul gazes in an esoteric direction

It sees smoke arising from fiery grass

Missiles of infinite malice flying through space

Screams of regret

Of lost hope

The soul turns to a brilliant light sitting beside it

“Why?”

Experience is the essence of life 

The light homogenizes back into the universe 

Time is an arbitrary concept

It’s not too late to start over

Because the god of wisdom 

Is you

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: Levi Kassinove, Picnic at the edge of time

That Feeling

September 1, 2022 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

The Blog staff’s second assignment was to “Find a cause” and share it with us, The Bird on Fire readers. Some student bloggers chose to champion their own causes, explain causes going viral, or causes brought about through environmental, political, or social change. Penny, in verse form, chose to illuminate the importance of reaching out to another.

Blog Advisor Zachik

By 7th-Grader Penny Andreas 

The school bell rings

Kids come out of the doors

I sit there waiting

Thinking had anybody come

I come back to my house

Nobody wondering if I am okay

Nobody even noticing

I sit alone with my doubts

I take a walk

By myself

Thinking would anybody notice

If I was gone

Next day I consider not waking up

Still I come to school

Then she walked up to me 

And said she wanted to talk

My classmate guided me out to the hall

She asked if I was okay

I started to cry

I started to bawl 

I told her everything

My struggles at home

I told her the feeling

Of being alone

At first she just looked at me

Then took my hand

She said it would be okay

And she understands

She helped me to my feet

And said she was sorry

She said I have felt that feeling

Of feeling solitary

I will forever thank her

For getting me to my feet

For listening to what I said

For accepting me

For somehow seeing

That feeling

Filed Under: Gratitude, Health and Disease, Humanity, Introspection, Poetry Tagged With: Penny Andreas, That Feeling

Day and Night

May 11, 2022 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

A Sonnet, by Elizabeth Etebar

The sun wakes you up

You drink milk from a cup

Time to go to school

I guess it is very cool

You have to work just a bunch

And now it’s time for lunch

You have to use your chromes

Everyone go to your homes

Time to eat dinner

And you’ll be a winner

It’s time to be clean

And shower up like a queen

The moon sings a lullaby and closes the door

You fall asleep and you snore

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: Day and Night, Elizabeth Etebar

Isabella with the Words

December 1, 2021 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

Congratulations to Palm Valley School’s US Poetry Recitation winner: Senior Isabella Goetschel. Isabella recited “Epitaph” by 17th-century poet Katherine Philips. In a striking twist of fate, Isabella was also selected Audience Favorite. Second Place went to Sophomore Indy Behr with a recitation of “be careful” by poet Ed Roberson. The Third Place recitation went to Freshman Lily Jones with “Poor Angels” by poet Edward Hirsch.

On the Friday before Thanksgiving break, the Upper School gathered for Poetry Recitation Finals in the Gym. Eleven finalists competed before judges Ms. Bernstein, Ms. Maguire, and Mr. Richardt. The judging criteria was that of Poetry Out Loud.

Isabella will advance to Riverside County Poetry Out Loud. She is our Palm Valley School representative. She will recite two poems before a panel of judges. If she wins, she advances to State Poetry Out Loud competition. Indiana serves as our alternate.

Filed Under: Arts & Letters Awards, Culture, Current News, Entertainment, Festivities, Performances, Poetry, School Events Tagged With: Isabella with the Words, Poetry Recitation

I’ve fallen out of love…

November 18, 2021 by szachik@pvs.org Leave a Comment

By Ike Spry, Poet Guy

I’ve fallen out of love

There’s not much left I can give

my heart beats slow

In a cold dark room 

Sleeping beside you

I’ll never forget how your soft lips felt

And the feeling I got from seeing you

How you gave me all of you

And now I give you 

what is left of me

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: I've fallen out of love . . ., Ike Spry

The Beach

November 17, 2021 by szachik@pvs.org 3 Comments

By Guest Poet 8th Grader Emily Feffer

Emily, a consummate writer, submitted a poem to the CVRep Poetry Contest. She shares with us “The Beach.”

The sweet smell of salt

The taste of the sea

The calming waves

Turning a dusty blue

In the early morning light

Surfers

Bodyboarders

Paddleboarders

Aim for the 

Higher

Bigger

Waves

I like the 

Small

Calm

Shallow

Waves

Am I scared?

No

Hesitant?

Perhaps

Calm?

Yes

This is my happy place

Soft waves

Shifting sands

The sweet smell of salt

The taste of the sea

The calming waves

Turning a dusty blue

In the late afternoon light

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: Emily Feffer, The Beach

“A poem begins as a lump in the throat . . .”

November 17, 2021 by szachik@pvs.org 1 Comment

. . . so wrote poet Robert Frost. Despite lumps in throats, on Tuesday, Middle School Poetry Recitation finalists–

  • Ciera Carr
  • Roman Soobben
  • Sherwin Hemmati
  • Sierra James
  • Mia Meyer
  • Jackie Padgett
  • Tal Maruvada
  • Yola Belickis
  • Zander Eaton
  • Walker Craven
  • Louisa Richardson
  • McKenzi Johnson–

gracefully, and sometimes passionately, shared words of solace, concern, love, hurt, and presence. Judges Andrea Coffey, Chris Griffin, and J.K. Hilbert selected the three most outstanding recitations–those of Ciera Carr, Zander Eaton, and McKenzi Johnson. Following Poetry Out Loud guidelines, the three were acknowledged for the poise and appropriateness of their physical presence, articulation and enunciation, and understanding. Ciera Carr was selected Audience Favorite.

Middle School Poetry Recitation Champions: McKenzi Johnson, Zander Eaton, and Ciera Carr. Photo Credit: Chris Griffin
For her recitation of the poem “Lost,” Ciera Carr was voted Audience Favorite. Photo Credit: Chris Griffin

Filed Under: Arts & Letters Awards, Festivities, Performances, Poetry, School Events Tagged With: "A poem begins as a lump in the throat"

Foreigner

November 1, 2021 by szachik@pvs.org 2 Comments

By Sophomore Guest Poet Remy Haring

I drift through this unfamiliar land

Gripping tightly a picture of those of a bygone era

Draped in a cloak and veil

The blowing sand flays my skin like razor blades

And I can’t see my hand if I put it out in front of me

I am not from here

I am not welcome here

The folk here view me as a vagabond

They knew each other since they were naught but children

And they are ruthless to outsiders

Backstabbing and treachery are a daily act

When I wander into town I am met with glares or apathy

I find it best to keep my mouth shut around them

In order to survive I must look over my shoulder

And keep moving

I write this as I make camp for the night in the dunes

It’s getting late

I should get in my sleeping bag

Lulled by the lullaby of the storm

Filed Under: Poetry Tagged With: Foreigner, Remy Haring

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